Shin-En Revisioned
Doing fast triplets is hard
Most of us couldn’t
Colorful obi
We debated at great length
Finally, yellow
I wait nervously
When do I come in again?
I think I missed it
Cello, take, gong
Hira, vocals, Thunder God
It’s Kaminari
Senryu stands waiting
Sheilarae and Greg spaced out
All’s well that ends well
“finally, yellow” — weeks of discussion summed up in 5 syllables.
perhaps that’s what makes some haiku so poignant/powerful/insightful – because there are so few words, each one matters that much more